A Third Son's Unlucky Rise to Prominence - Novel Discussion
This shit is allowed? If I was the king I not never allow such a disgraceful show of my kingdom's officials.
Using wind and water magic to create telescope, that's the most interesting take in combining both magic. Though I hope you explain the system of magic and martial arts in this world and what it means to use dozens of magic circles.
I guess it's intentional, but the loss of Emily felt so sudden. It feels real rather than like a fictional death foreshadowed early on in the character's introduction.
I really like the sprinkled in word-building. It's much prefer compared to massive info dumps.
Sexism hasn't been mentioned much with all of the powerful female characters, so this was kinda a surprise.
Love a pleasant surprise from dead adoptive father. Or was he Korrina's birth father. Can't remember