Mm ahora será difícil que la villana y el villano jaja puedan intervenir juntos para salvar el destino del mundo
Try Again, Villainess? - Novel Discussion
Ohh que pena... Espero que se alivie su culpa al ver a Renee bien con Astarea
I just can't understand why the leads in these kinds of novels always stalk the original characters. They always and it is really ALWAYS get caught and this leads to changing the story away from their desired course
Is Drew possibly strongly corrupted by Blight? And because Lowe can purify Blight, it could give him that stinging feeling when he is touching her. (This is a complete speculation on my part, but it would make for an interesting storyline and would be a good reason for him to approach her. It is very likely I am reading too much in this really short interaction)
I'm still not sure, but Kairen doesn't seem to be a transmigrator+regressor like Astraea and only a regressor, since he would have figured out that she was sus when she took Lowe's place. It is a bit weird Kairen killed Lowe in the last round because he is clinging to her like that in this round. Maybe Kairen was overwhelmed by blight and not in control, which led to him killing Lowe, while she saved him by purifying the blight.
Ok, so my fanfic from the previous chapter was kinda pointless and completely removed from rationality... That's also kinda funny :sweat_smile:
I hope this gets signed on this site. The plot is interesting and I like the characters. Even though I am not a big fan of the romance-fantasy-academy genre, I think this was great since it broke most of my dislikes with the genre. I already read some of the other books and currently this is my top pick
Thanks for reading till the end and even commenting!! Err, I hope the story continues to be a good read for ya’al, and yes, this novel is intended for serialisation. So I’ve gotcha covered for that. Though you have to wait a bit cuz it takes time to set up a new series on genesis. Please look forward to it!
Typos mannn typos… I submitted this draft like, on the very week genesis announced the writing competition back in October and never looked back. Heck, there are so many errors I’m ashamed to say it’s probably the least polished story among the eleven.
Also, this is a bit of a spoiler but the whole misunderstanding thing will be used as a plot device for a period until I settle the reader into the world lore properly. Need a new hook if i’ma let go the old one.
And thank you so much for reading all the way till chapter 20!! Appreciate the comment too!
YES, THIS WILL GET A SERIALIZATION I SWEAR. Not sure how my writing preferences will fare going down the line the later chapters when the focus starts to shift, so drop if it suddenly turns boring hahaha.
And thank you for reading all the way till the end! I super duper appreciate it! Makes me pumped to write more!
Yeh considering that there was no mention of Astrea being able to heal blight (she literally lost and the world fell to ruin) she probably only used some countermeasure to keep drew alive in the prologue nd lowe is the only healer
The description of the bloodied guy at the start goes a bit hard for my tastes, but seeing as it's from a girl's perspective and this is an otome game (sigh), it's understandable. The sh*t I put up with for ojou-sama female protags... Last scene has a bit too much telling for my tastes. I know it's the grand hook of your story and every author has their approach, but I'd have preferred a sense of mystery by explicitly refusing to reveal the bits about reincarnation or the regression until the moment came where someone within the story needed to know this fact explicitly... That said, this is why my works flies under the radar lel. As I tend to take my time with my big hooks, not all are bound to keep reading until things really kicks off.
Regardless, good luck with the contest.
Can't really blame the prince, assuming he truly was patient enough to wait several years. Only time will tell if the prince becomes more unlikeable or more morally gray.
So mind telling me what you mean by other novels ( tye names of the novels you wrote) I wanna check them out