@EverXChosen

Is this a 1:1 translation? Some of these phrases and word placements are really weird for English.

The pacing of how the words flow is still throwing me off. Hoping it clears up, but could just be me reading this while tired XD

Reading "Growl" several times next to each other is pretty funny, not gonna lie

And so the parties danger sense user begins

Be wild/funny if he found someone that was like super specialized. Like 100 Str and Stamina but like 5 everything else.

I hope we get a little more depth on why he dislikes the angels or Seraph so much. If it was like the Doombreaker series I understand. But so far they are just slightly impartial guides.

I feel like if the Hwajeong bits were bolden in orange, it might make it easier for telling his thinking moments vs her talking to him.

I forgot how cheesy some abilities and such were called ;)