Goxelu

Just a very small detail: when talking about healing Hyun, it reas as if the MC drank and applied the potion on himself, instead of Hyun.

When the conversation is all jumbled up, is that a stylistic approach? To show important and unimportant dialogue? Or just something overlooked. Its getting more frequent as the chapters go

Ah sorry, sent before finishing. I just noticed that so many one-line paragraphs affect the quality of the reading, maes it feel clunky. I understand it's the way the author is spacing out actions in combat, but might there be another way?

Im overall enjoying the story. I feel the pace is slightly too quick, but since there's only so little chapters out I still can't see what the author has in mind, so it might be okay.

There has been a couple times now where Strength being at 8 is mentioned, but didn't he apply 2 unallocated to get to 10? Other was somewhere in chapter 2 I think