Goxelu

Hello It's good to see you're back, hope everything went well with exams. To be conoletely honest, I can't clearly remember how the chapters were before your revisions, but I can definetly tell that it has been improved. At least my intern

I still find the transition from the previous chapter to this one kind of awkward. It's the repeating parts that change just enough to feel like theyre completely different maybe? Like a mini retcon?

This chapter randonly repeats translated sentences and paragraphs, even in the middle of another one. Very hard to read

The word wife appears a lot in this chapter, but I'm guessing it's a mistranslation. "The wife of the infinite library" doesnt really make sense

This chapter is not formatted, so it's currently just a block of text. It's readable, but hard to do

I overall like the story and the characters for now, but the way it's written, with so many one line paragraphs just messes with my internal reading tempo. At least for me, it's not flowing and feels clunky, so I can do maybe a couole of ch

For some reason, the word church has replaced the word order all through the chapter

Names of skills, classes, people, places, groups are just randomly different in this chaoter and then go back to usual in the next. Is it possible to fix?