Hanging Beleif

Nah trust they totally did it on purpose! It flowed so naturally!

Su Mo is so far a very unlikeable character, at least to me. Hope that changes soon.

This is a good introduction. It dosent feel rushed in anyway, and makes me want to keep reading the story, While it does introduce alot of character none of them are important and it since they're names are basic descriptions of them it mak

So usually I'm much more lenient, but since this is a story ima be a very critical. So first off they introduced way to many characters in the first chapter. On top of that it seems very rushed. This should probably have been split into two