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If there's anything to improve it would be to cull some of the repetition of conclusions that you've already revealed. For example, once Hajin chose the key and revealed his objective to focus on knowledge instead of items, you only need t

Yesssss murim sidequest go! I'm very much enjoying the direction of your writing so far. There's so much potential for branching storylines while maintaining a central plot!

I don't mind the one line paragraphs! I'm used to that flow from reading k-novels. In fact when it's a sound effect it emphasizes the urgency or action! I don't have a preference either way for the system being in a box effect. So far I hav

Thanks for the long chapter! Looking forward to more!

Thank you for the flood of chapters! It's been a great ride so far with some intriguing new characters. Hoping Ha-jin builds some friendships as he grows! Poor guy needs some light-hearted fun in his life. Get well soon!

Very much enjoying the story so far! The world building is interesting and Ha-Jin's character is a good mix of pragmatic+protective.

Great chapter! Definitely looking forward to more!

Cool concept and MC is turning out to be one of my favourite types - protective of family and puts in the work.