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A Third Son's Unlucky Rise to Prominence - Novel Discussion Ch. 214mo
I'm still not sure how it got first place. The dialogue needs a lot of improvement. Reason behind events is too laid back it hurts🥲 However, the story's not so bad? 🤷 I hope the author improves.
A Third Son's Unlucky Rise to Prominence - Novel Discussion Ch. 014mo
Unbelievable 🤦as much as y'all get to criticize the book, make your comments and all, many of you went overboard for nothing. It's a first chapter and beginning of a story for a reason. Except the comments are on all 20 chapters written so