Shay

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@shay

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Escaping the mysterious hotel is the goat and shadow slave doesn't even come close. LOTM does.

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A Third Son's Unlucky Rise to Prominence - Novel Discussion Ch. 1914mo

My biggest complaint is that Astarte is not heree  <img src="https://api.genesistudio.com/storage/v1/object/public/directus/190aeb15-4433-48a4-b58b-523fa3916a24.png" alt="NTRd" class="inline-emoji" style="height: 2em; vertical-align: m

A Third Son's Unlucky Rise to Prominence - Novel Discussion Ch. 1614mo

NO WAY AN AMBUSH?! <img src="https://api.genesistudio.com/storage/v1/object/public/directus/c45ad639-3070-491a-91bb-7b193c94f758.png" alt="Confused Unga Bunga" class="inline-emoji" style="height: 2em; vertical-align: middle; display: inline

A Third Son's Unlucky Rise to Prominence - Novel Discussion Ch. 1514mo

Okay I am warming up to their banter, especially Astarte!   <img src="https://api.genesistudio.com/storage/v1/object/public/directus/e886e9c5-afa9-41f2-96e1-156acef75ff8.png" alt="Happy" class="inline-emoji" style="height: 2em; ve

A Third Son's Unlucky Rise to Prominence - Novel Discussion Ch. 1114mo

I sense something thickening and its not the plot ¬¬

A Third Son's Unlucky Rise to Prominence - Novel Discussion Ch. 1014mo

He can only hope that 'another substance' will not make him gag oo

A Third Son's Unlucky Rise to Prominence - Novel Discussion Ch. 814mo

I hate that chapters don't have a title

A Third Son's Unlucky Rise to Prominence - Novel Discussion Ch. 314mo

If Astarte was a better maid and did a good job protecting him, she woulnd't have done this badly. Also the formal speech is already taking its toll on me.

A Third Son's Unlucky Rise to Prominence - Novel Discussion Ch. 014mo

You seem very angry for a first chapter? Claiming the 'story' is bad when we only have a premise, but then going on and on about writing...I agree that it has a lot of issues though. My biggest gripe was how the actions of Claudius are hand