Mm the subjects / pronouns are a bit messy (reversing I and you, or I and he (for Neria too!) that kind of stuff). Still, thanks for the chapter. I like Neria POVs, progress ! :)
Thanks! I tried to fix it, please check!
Thanks! I tried to fix it, please check!
Much better, thanks :)
"She didn't recognize you" -> "I didn't recognize him" and other lil pronoun mistakes. Still understandable from context though ! Thanks for the chapter
Review guys
Can't be helped then
Should be fixed now, thanks for reporting.
I need to know too
nice
