Apprentice Witch Rehabilitation Department Discussion

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PenguinDeer

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2 weeks ago Ch. 17 Penguin Squad

Mm the subjects / pronouns are a bit messy (reversing I and you, or I and he (for Neria too!) that kind of stuff). Still, thanks for the chapter. I like Neria POVs, progress ! :)

unav4ila8le

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2 weeks ago Ch. 17 Penguin Squad

PenguinDeerMm the subjects / pronouns are a bit messy (reversing I and you, or I and he (for Neria too!) that kind of stuff). Still, thanks for the ...

Thanks! I tried to fix it, please check!

MacaroniPenguin

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2 weeks ago Ch. 17 Penguin Squad

PenguinDeerMm the subjects / pronouns are a bit messy (reversing I and you, or I and he (for Neria too!) that kind of stuff). Still, thanks for the ...

Thanks! I tried to fix it, please check!

PenguinDeer

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2 weeks ago Ch. 17 Penguin Squad

PenguinDeerMm the subjects / pronouns are a bit messy (reversing I and you, or I and he (for Neria too!) that kind of stuff). Still, thanks for the ...

Much better, thanks :)

PenguinDeer

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2 weeks ago Ch. 19 Penguin Squad

"She didn't recognize you" -> "I didn't recognize him" and other lil pronoun mistakes. Still understandable from context though ! Thanks for the chapter

dikayri

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1 week ago Penguin Squad

Review guys

PenguinDeer

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1 week ago Ch. 25 Penguin Squad

Can't be helped then

MacaroniPenguin

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1 week ago Ch. 26 Penguin Squad

Should be fixed now, thanks for reporting.

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