Idk if the author can see but you story is very good. The interaction btw the characters is really human. And the speach is so smart and interesting. Rain is for this moment a character so human. I search a roman like Shadow slave for the character development, This novel is the only novel which approach Shadow slave. Truly good. I hope for the rest !!
Idk if the autor can see this, but this story is so cool. The character development is truly well done. Rain is the most hulan mc i see since a long time. For me the start of this serie is as well that Shadow slave. I hope for the rest.
Hahah, thank you so much for both of your comments! I'll continue to do my very best with my little story, I only hope I can hold your interest in the coming future! Your words truly mean the world to me. <3
i'm going to become a cliffhanger god... just you watch...
If you wait two months to reply, I believe you. SMH.
Yessir yessiree!
The drastic solution for sure
Ah university; the institution of apple learning
Did they do some rewrites or is this still the same as the old one?
The overarching story so far should be nearly identical. There were some changes, fixes, and I think a few additions, but I'm not sure if they necessitate a re-read for anyone who read the contest entry.
The edits were made quite a while ago, so I don't exactly recall what all was changed.
I like the illustration a lot I gotta say, that alone got me interested
But it seems that was what he had to do anyway, so... I dunno dude xD
I hope he will do some training, I am curious about the power system in this world. Do people have special power, mana, magic and so on
Killed his comrades and himself... Could that monster only absorb living beings perhaps? Absorbed might be painful as fuck.... Anyway, memory loss must be important plot sauce.
And I look forward to him training as a maniac. Still though. Great Paladin, that is some title
I have always eaten the entire apple, I honestly like the seeds inside. Just, don´t eat too much of them apples, they do contain something that turns into cyanide inside the body. I think you need to eat like 100 seeds in one go for there to be danger. Each apple has like up to 10 seeds, but I guess 6-7 is the norm
Apple farts, right?
