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Hypogeum, I - Novel Discussion

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DeusMechanicus
AElite
11 months ago Ch. 22

Yeah, I really like this novel. And I only have one more free chapter. Goddamnit.

I hope she isn´t dying or something like that, that would suck super bad.

I feel like he will ramp up his efforts to be strong even more, thanks to her, and I would love that

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DeusMechanicus
AElite
11 months ago Ch. 23

Why isn´t he eating though? He needs protein to be a gym bro.

Btw, as someone that likes spiders, I enjoyed this. As long as there are not hundreds of tiny ones scuttling around... even I am bothered by that. Anyway, I have a goood feeling about this novel, wish I could change my one luminary slot to this one asap

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WayFinder29
BVeteran
11 months ago Ch. 0

After ignoring this for so long I decided to check if it's worth it to read. And wow, this is one novel of great quality! It's probably on par with otherworldly trpg and OFPV, I'm so glad I came here 😊😊

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WayFinder29
BVeteran
11 months ago Ch. 1

The jnteractions are fresh to see

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WayFinder29
BVeteran
11 months ago Ch. 2

I like this moments of peace

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WayFinder29
BVeteran
11 months ago Ch. 4

He married his own bed XD. That aside, tye one that regressed him, had probably made him its chosen one or something. In exchange, he lost his original identity.

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WayFinder29
BVeteran
11 months ago Ch. 6

I don't care if the narrative is too wordy or long. Even if there's no action that has yet to appear, im just satisfied with this peaceful chatter.

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tremblingrabbit
ENewly Awakened
11 months ago Ch. 0
WayFinder29After ignoring this for so long I decided to check if it's worth it to read. And wow, this is one novel of great quality! It's probably o...

Far too flattering for a writer of my caliber. Thank you, but I still have a long ways to grow. I hope that, someday, I can reach that sort of level. So I don't inundate you with replies on the rest of your comments too, I'd just like to give a blanket thank you for your time, as well <3

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WayFinder29
BVeteran
11 months ago Ch. 9

Yeah it's definitely weird that he can speak and read their language. Hmmm, maybe Teres even though he appears nicely is already very suspicious of Rain?

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WayFinder29
BVeteran
11 months ago Ch. 10

He has a very normal look. He just had a slightly depressed look

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Alexander
ENewly Awakened
11 months ago Ch. 18

How can he read that’s world writing, and is the plumbing in that world on par with ours? whats with the modern shower?

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tremblingrabbit
ENewly Awakened
11 months ago Ch. 18
AlexanderHow can he read that’s world writing, and is the plumbing in that world on par with ours? whats with the modern shower?

Since I done seen't it...! First: He's already lived there for six years before his suicide-slash-regression. I think it's fair to just assume that a man in his position would have been forced into learning to read, or even taken the time himself.

Shower is otherworlder influence. I think I made a brief, off-handed joke about this somewhere.

Details regarding regional plumbing are best saved for the story if/when it ever becomes relevant. I'll admit, I'm not trying to sit here giving a several-thousand-word diatribe on plumbing systems this early. I generally leave things open for interpretation, until later being elaborated on at a more opportune moment. Sorry for yapping!

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WayFinder29
BVeteran
10 months ago Ch. 17

Its great seeing the dynamics of both Milet and Rain.

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WayFinder29
BVeteran
10 months ago Ch. 21

I don't like this situation, but choices aligned pretty well with own characters and both of them had really good points

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