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The Erasure of the Margins - Novel Discussion

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jifeya5681
ENewly Awakened
1 week ago Ch. 1

It's quite good , though the writing gives a feeling of it being forced to be eloquent

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jifeya5681
ENewly Awakened
1 week ago Ch. 6

Tye premise is quite good., but the execution is bad

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howtofeellove
ENewly Awakened
1 week ago Ch. 9

Liked it so far. Just the explanation is more than what needed I guess.

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hobbylivingfictionwriter
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ENewly Awakened
1 week ago Ch. 1
jifeya5681It's quite good , though the writing gives a feeling of it being forced to be eloquent

Hi! 😊 Thank you so much for your thoughtful review. Your feedback truly means a lot to me, and I really appreciate the time you took to share it. ❀️

I went back through all the chapters and worked on improving the story based on your suggestions. Along the way, I ended up trimming about 800 words across 9 chapters to improve the pacing and overall flow. βœοΈπŸ“–

I hope the resubmitted files are approved and become public soon. 🀞✨ Thank you once again for your support and encouragement. It genuinely motivates me to keep writing. πŸ’™

I hope my stories continue to bring you a little entertainment, and I look forward to reading more of your reviews in the future. Happy reading! πŸ“šπŸ˜Š

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Raszhivyk
CTrusted
6 days ago Ch. 3

What kind of bored Eldritch being is pulling this crap on these guys?

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howtofeellove
ENewly Awakened
3 days ago Ch. 11

I liked this novel so far. It focus more on problem solving and changing the script. I don't know power ups like holy power, black magic, magic or aura exist or not. But so far, I liked it.

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