It's quite good , though the writing gives a feeling of it being forced to be eloquent
The Erasure of the Margins - Novel Discussion
Liked it so far. Just the explanation is more than what needed I guess.
thank for your review. I will soon try to revise all the chapters and make it better.
I will try to execute better during revision. Thank for reading and pointing out the weakness.
I will work hard to make it better. Thank You.
Hi! π Thank you so much for your thoughtful review. Your feedback truly means a lot to me, and I really appreciate the time you took to share it. β€οΈ
I went back through all the chapters and worked on improving the story based on your suggestions. Along the way, I ended up trimming about 800 words across 9 chapters to improve the pacing and overall flow. βοΈπ
I hope the resubmitted files are approved and become public soon. π€β¨ Thank you once again for your support and encouragement. It genuinely motivates me to keep writing. π
I hope my stories continue to bring you a little entertainment, and I look forward to reading more of your reviews in the future. Happy reading! ππ
What kind of bored Eldritch being is pulling this crap on these guys?
I liked this novel so far. It focus more on problem solving and changing the script. I don't know power ups like holy power, black magic, magic or aura exist or not. But so far, I liked it.