Ekko

If you noticed, Aric seemed to not really be himself since he awakened mana...also his thoughts are repeating. Another point, he for some reason is staying in the forest the whole time and doesn't return home. He hasn't talked to anyone el

For those reading in the future, that feel the story rushed ahead without establishing a lot of important points: Let the author cook

Hey, thanks for answering. If you say it's planned then I'm excited for the twist that's coming. I read a bit ahead already and got the vibe something wasn't right. It didn't make sense for someone that seemed so proficient at storytelling

The diaologue with the entity from beyond the veil was a bit...rushed? Felt like the author wanted to get ot over with, losing some of it's mystery and gravity. This could be two chapters, that are a bit more weighty.

Tftc That was a damn good fight-scene. Aric giving his best, but not being able to Dominate, because he is just a rookie. Even with the MC power-up only able to stall for time and wounding the guy. Now he got the motivation he needs. Glad

Tftc Our boy seems talented with the sword, let's hope he can proceed his tra... Well the plot just arrived, better buckle up MC!

my guess is that the outside world is corrupted by something and the relic should help fend that corruption off.

the start is very interesting. the two week timeskip wasn't something i liked, but in general a very cool first chapter. Somenthing tells me Elijah's Isekai experience isn't as innocent as those of most MCs