Awakening Dead - Novel Discussion

Wait, is he actually security, or is it just formalities?

I wasn't informed of the timing of the update in advance. :( I was actually rereading some of OFPV when it happened.

It is like that for most of the original novels atm, but I appreciate the comments. <3

Nice, me want more

Thanks for the comment. <3

Don't worry, I have a commenting quest every day.

I don't know if it's just me, but for some reason I can't see any replies past the first layer. So I only saw your reply in the notification...

It is also that way for me. </3

Honestly really didn't like this but i dont know bout other people

You definitely got some fantastic plot elements. Haven’t seen much dialogue, so I can’t make an executive decision on that front.

You seem to have a very fond appreciation for a certain size paragraph, this might make it a little tough to read but not a deal breaker. Will follow up in discord. Good job Degen

So he needs to believe in a false answer before his ability triggers thereby harming him.

Feels bad man.

Wtf Degen, this is crazy work. I’m liking it though. Really am.

And these aren’t regular zombies, they’re runners. They’re volatiles, they’re ____ (help me out guys)

So he DOES have feelings, just a little mentally unstable.

It’s only getting better & better by the way. A balanced & proper mix of plot & character progress

Mans is living hell. He doesn’t get the rest that an infinite regressor would. It’s like he can even think freely, moving based purely on instinct & even then, resisting it to the up most degree.

Well done

Was this… was this actually a grimdark?? Have I been tricked?

Soph is cute.

But I thought this was supposed to be an action adventure or something. It feels more like a tragedy & I end up pitying Stephen more & more

He’s literally insane & stunted yet playing house is what gets him. Stephen is too pure

What the hell. I feel like crying now. This is sad. Why are you original authors addicts to pain

Honestly, this feels morbid as hell. You’ve some how managed to grab something as equally terrifying as OFPV’s mass grave(although with less build up obviously). This oppression is equally as grotesque. I’m amazed.

This is fantastic!

That ended quickly...