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Hypogeum, I - Novel Discussion

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ENewly Awakened
17 months ago Ch. 2

I don't know, I find the interactions a little strange, I understand that in his past life he might have grown fond of them or maybe it's his fault talking about not being able to protect them, but I find it strange that you don't get upset when they kidnapped you and openly admit that they practically did it as a joke, in his case it seems that he had nothing that tied him to their world but simply a church that plays with people's lives doesn't seem trustworthy to me, imagine if it were another person with a happy life and they screw him over for nothing, it really makes me see the church as bad.

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NotADegen
CTrusted
17 months ago Ch. 0

Good start. I've always liked 'campfire' scenes. <3

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SMonarch
17 months ago Ch. 0

Multiple transmigator, reincamysterious enemies. Good prologue

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NotADegen
CTrusted
17 months ago Ch. 1

Nice amount of humor. The world building around religion is interesting to me -- especially the "Greater Association of Faith."

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RohanTheDragon
AElite
17 months ago Ch. 0

I liked it. The dialogue which is probably the most nuanced aspect writing(from my perspective) was well done. Definitely felt real. Stand proud Rabit, you’re good.

Also, I have a penchant for the eldritch. Can’t wait to explore the shadows.

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RohanTheDragon
AElite
17 months ago Ch. 1

Bro got kidnapped by kids 🤣

Seriously tho, Rain is good name. Tho I am wondering why it’s been a few years since he’s been called his real name??

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RohanTheDragon
AElite
17 months ago Ch. 2

Hell yeah, put some respect on those janitors!!!

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SMonarch
17 months ago Ch. 1

Summoned just to babysit some kids 😂. And unexpectedly 'good' Church

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RohanTheDragon
AElite
17 months ago Ch. 3

Father Korrinn the Goat. He’s an actual dad. Guessing High Father Teres is a grandpa & Rain be their big bro.

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RohanTheDragon
AElite
17 months ago Ch. 4

Give thanks to thee oh bed-rum

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RohanTheDragon
AElite
17 months ago Ch. 5

Truly a big bro suffering from his sisters trouble making. Accurate to a T

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RohanTheDragon
AElite
17 months ago Ch. 6

Big brother Rain keeping his little sister safe from dark hallways. Cute

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RohanTheDragon
AElite
17 months ago Ch. 7

Traumatized regressors never seem to have the ability to act.(/hide their trauma)

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RohanTheDragon
AElite
17 months ago Ch. 8

Now you got me curious about who &/or what’s in the attic. Also, 6 hours to clean this? I suddenly feel blessed to live in the modern age

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RohanTheDragon
AElite
17 months ago Ch. 9

Mans was risking it with those questions. He hella awkward.

BUT SHE WAS FLIRTING WITH HIM!! DENSE MOFO

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