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I Alone Have 314159265359 Dungeons! - Novel Discussion

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Jieshika
DRegular
2 weeks ago Ch. 19

So satisfying! I don't really remember the original version if you revised it, but this chapter had a great flow with the action!

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Jieshika
DRegular
2 weeks ago Ch. 21

It's so interesting that I remember thinking "ahhh, Yoo-bin you're still so young" when I first read this. Had exactly the same reaction just now. And Ha-jin's cool-guy aesthetic works well with his nonchalance. So much bravado at 18 years old... 🤭

The setup is interesting since Yoo-bin is currently a grey-area character with hints at a more involved background. Looking forward to more of her development as a potential semi-ally (?) with an agenda.

Also it's nice to see the small glimpses of the underbelly of society. Good world building so far! I'm curious where Ha-jin gets his intel from... Do all the kids chat about secret code knocks on SNS?

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Jieshika
DRegular
2 weeks ago Ch. 24

Ha-jin is such a bulldozer when it comes to his fighting style 😂 his mana usage is basically "pour it into whatever I'm thinking about and see what happens". It'll be fun to see how his style develops as he navigates the different worlds

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Goxelu
ENewly Awakened
1 week ago Ch. 27

I was wondering. If it's the First Cataclysmic Episode, how there was one before with the March of the Goblin King, so he know what it is? Or maybe each mythos has subsequent episodes?

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Goxelu
ENewly Awakened
1 week ago Ch. 29

I thought the escape routes were already disucssed in a previous chapter, especifically mentioning the tunnel and service road?

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Jieshika
DRegular
1 week ago Ch. 35

Ok wow huuuge storyline change with the revision! And in typical Ha-jin fashion, bulldozing ahead regardless of the risk 🫣 I feel like this is going to move fast!

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Jieshika
DRegular
1 week ago Ch. 36

Interesting premise for this dungeon! I'm a little disappointed that Ha-jin's already so OP but I guess that expedites the story telling. Quick continuity note: Hwa Yeon Ran was described as having black hair in the last chapter and silver in this one

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howtofeellove
Author
ENewly Awakened
1 week ago Ch. 36
JieshikaInteresting premise for this dungeon! I'm a little disappointed that Ha-jin's already so OP but I guess that expedites the story telling....

Thanks for pointing out the mistake! I’ve corrected it. I also tried to improve both chapters of the Heavenly Demon arc and added some additional information to the previous chapter. Hopefully, you’ll like the changes.

Thanks again for checking it out and for the feedback!

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Jieshika
DRegular
1 week ago Ch. 35

Thanks for pointing out that you updated this chapter again! The added info & expanded scenes really improved the flow and I was much more immersed this time. I hope we get some back story for the origins of Ha-jin's roleplay character. The elaborate seal is very intriguing... 🤔

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