MEMORIZE - Novel Discussion
He really only killed a vagrant who literally tried to kill him and his party, and would have seeked revenge if he spared her, and that one girl beyond saving who would need an Elixir and wasn't worth it. Not exactly any edgy tantrums. Don't get me wrong, the MC is edgy af and a bit psychotic, but no killing for the sake of killing, yet.
Waiting to this relationship to gets better, Seraph doesn’t appear to be an enemy
Unique abilities does appear to be way stronger, but how come it’s unlocked by having one more latent ability? Like, latent should be way “weaker” than a unique ability
Sword master should be more OP than sword specialist, be name alone, I think what makes the class better is its rarity, not the name itself
It gets annoyed the focus that it’s giving to him knowing more that he should, like, we get it already, move on
As custom, the OP item that has sentience but the sentience is of a child
A fire in his heart should pump up something different, like changing his mana to be a different color
You know, MC monologues are normally a cool part, but this author way of doing gets way too obvious is a way to extend character count
The forest with all types of people, did remember me of that cartoon show in an island of adventure, Total Drama Show
Just a very small detail: when talking about healing Hyun, it reas as if the MC drank and applied the potion on himself, instead of Hyun.