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Erebus
ENewly Awakened
17 months ago Ch. 11

I have a feeling that his future self is the reason why their still alive.

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RohanTheDragon
AElite
17 months ago Ch. 11

Cute stuff. Loving the puppy. The group dynamics are very fun to read. Want more of the princess tho(I got a penchant for dragon & dragon-likes)

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RohanTheDragon
AElite
17 months ago Ch. 12

Nooooo! I like the brother dynamics you got going on!!

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RohanTheDragon
AElite
17 months ago Ch. 13

I miss Alex already. Big RIP

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RohanTheDragon
AElite
17 months ago Ch. 14

HLL TO THE YEAH!!!!! WOOOO

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RohanTheDragon
AElite
17 months ago Ch. 15

More princesses?? More cuddle & TLC time for Stephen??? 🥺

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RohanTheDragon
AElite
17 months ago Ch. 17

Poor Stephen, bros actually getting cornered

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RohanTheDragon
AElite
17 months ago Ch. 18

Bye bye Mr. Bus Driver. Also, they got the whole world but both the Demon Lord & (what I’m assuming is) the fourth in command in one spot. Truly unlucky

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RohanTheDragon
AElite
17 months ago Ch. 19

Stephen calmly controlling the situation to not give away any cards like the last mind he his

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RohanTheDragon
AElite
17 months ago Ch. 20

Mmmm, while I do believe having a very “plot-driven” story is an advantage, it wouldn’t have hurt to have had a couple chapters take a sideline & develop the characters/dynamics more.

I have a stomachs for nearly all things literature & storytelling, but I’ve never been particularly fond of system trope & Ive never put in the time to develop my understanding of of “cultivation” tropes & the stuff related.

Despite all of this, you’ve kept me interested far more & for far longer than any other novel with such a trope(with my taste being as developed as it is now of course).

This feat truly attests to your dialogue & character dynamics, along with story elements.

Well done Degen!

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NotADegen
CTrusted
17 months ago Ch. 20
RohanTheDragonMmmm, while I do believe having a very “plot-driven” story is an advantage, it wouldn’t have hurt to have had a couple chapters take a si...

Well, I always saw the initial chapters as an extended prologue. It is a kind of microcosm/panorama of the novel: mob battles, boss battle, team-oriented combat, solo combat, tone, jokes, character introduction, character personality ('crazy' side), writing style. In a way it is a tutorial for reading the novel as well as a tutorial for the characters.

If you've ever played a Bethesda game, I think it kind of like the opening to those games: leaving the vault, escaping jail, etc. You get this relatively confined space and then open up to the larger world.

Can't say such a method is good or that I succeeded, lol.

Anyways thanks for reading and providing feedback. <3

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DRegular
17 months ago Ch. 1

ย.Excellent

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DRegular
17 months ago Ch. 11

เป็นบทที่สมบูรณ์แบบ

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DRegular
17 months ago Ch. 18

เกิดอะไรขึ้นกันะ

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DeusMechanicus
AElite
15 months ago Ch. 1

Yet another new novel to read. Hope it is good

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