I have a feeling that his future self is the reason why their still alive.
Awakening Dead - Novel Discussion
HEY!! 😡 Censor those words!! This is a decent site for decent folk!
Cute stuff. Loving the puppy. The group dynamics are very fun to read. Want more of the princess tho(I got a penchant for dragon & dragon-likes)
Bye bye Mr. Bus Driver. Also, they got the whole world but both the Demon Lord & (what I’m assuming is) the fourth in command in one spot. Truly unlucky
Stephen calmly controlling the situation to not give away any cards like the last mind he his
Mmmm, while I do believe having a very “plot-driven” story is an advantage, it wouldn’t have hurt to have had a couple chapters take a sideline & develop the characters/dynamics more.
I have a stomachs for nearly all things literature & storytelling, but I’ve never been particularly fond of system trope & Ive never put in the time to develop my understanding of of “cultivation” tropes & the stuff related.
Despite all of this, you’ve kept me interested far more & for far longer than any other novel with such a trope(with my taste being as developed as it is now of course).
This feat truly attests to your dialogue & character dynamics, along with story elements.
Well done Degen!
Well, I always saw the initial chapters as an extended prologue. It is a kind of microcosm/panorama of the novel: mob battles, boss battle, team-oriented combat, solo combat, tone, jokes, character introduction, character personality ('crazy' side), writing style. In a way it is a tutorial for reading the novel as well as a tutorial for the characters.
If you've ever played a Bethesda game, I think it kind of like the opening to those games: leaving the vault, escaping jail, etc. You get this relatively confined space and then open up to the larger world.
Can't say such a method is good or that I succeeded, lol.
Anyways thanks for reading and providing feedback. <3
You’re finally awake. I heard you were trying to cross the border—