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howtofeellove
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ENewly Awakened
3 weeks ago Ch. 25

Hi, guys!! I hope you’re enjoying the story, and guess what? I’m back!

I’ll try to upload a new chapter every other day for now because I need to focus on my upcoming exams, lab work, and assignments as well.

I also wanted to ask for your advice. Do you prefer the original status window and system window formats, or would you rather have the information displayed inside colored boxes, such as blue, red, gold, purple, etc.?

If the majority prefers the box format, which color would you like me to use? Let me know your thoughts in the comments. I’d really appreciate your feedback.

And after that, I have another task to work on...

[IMPORTANT] I will be revising all the chapters little by little. Don’t worry, the actual content of the story will not change. I’m only going to improve the paragraph formatting.

I’ve noticed that I sometimes use lines containing only a single word or just a few words, and I also feel that this can break the immersion while reading. So, I’ll be adjusting the paragraph structure and combining some of those lines where appropriate to make the chapters flow more naturally.

Thank you for your patience, support, and feedback. I hope you’ll continue enjoying the story!

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Jieshika
ENewly Awakened
3 weeks ago Ch. 25

Thanks for the long chapter! Looking forward to more!

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Jieshika
ENewly Awakened
3 weeks ago Ch. 25
howtofeelloveHi, guys!! I hope you’re enjoying the story, and guess what? I’m back! I’ll try to upload a new chapter every other day for now because I...

I don't mind the one line paragraphs! I'm used to that flow from reading k-novels. In fact when it's a sound effect it emphasizes the urgency or action! I don't have a preference either way for the system being in a box effect. So far I haven't had any issues with following along, but if you're wanting to try it I'll give you feedback on how it looks! Keep up the fun flow!

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howtofeellove
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ENewly Awakened
3 weeks ago Ch. 25
JieshikaThanks for the long chapter! Looking forward to more!

Thank you so much for the review! 😊 I completely agree that the sound effects are essential, and they will definitely remain. I will just try to reduce some of the repetition and make those parts flow more naturally.

For example, instead of writing separate lines like “He arrived here. He thought about this. He considered that…” I can combine the ideas into something smoother, such as “As he settled into his new surroundings, he thought about a new way to counter…”

Overall, I am not changing the story itself. The story, its direction, and the events will remain the same. I am only working on making the writing smoother and less repetitive. ✍️

Soon, one of my favorite acts from all the chapters I have written so far will be coming out, hopefully within the next 20 days. 😊 Little by little, beyond the goals of family safety, money and a better life, new goals and ambitions will also begin to unfold.

Thank you for reading and supporting the story. I truly appreciate it. ❤️ Please stay tuned! 🔥

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Jieshika
ENewly Awakened
2 days ago Ch. 35

Yesssss murim sidequest go! I'm very much enjoying the direction of your writing so far. There's so much potential for branching storylines while maintaining a central plot!

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Jieshika
ENewly Awakened
2 days ago Ch. 35
JieshikaYesssss murim sidequest go! I'm very much enjoying the direction of your writing so far. There's so much potential for branching storylin...

If there's anything to improve it would be to cull some of the repetition of conclusions that you've already revealed.

For example, once Hajin chose the key and revealed his objective to focus on knowledge instead of items, you only need to clarify his reasoning once instead of repeating the same thoughts before he steps into the roleplay dimension.

The repetition in such close proximity within the story makes the narration drag a little too much.

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howtofeellove
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ENewly Awakened
22 hours ago

📢 A Little Announcement ❤️

Hi everyone! I hope you’re all doing well. 🌸

This is my first time making an announcement, so I wanted to take a moment to properly update you all and, most importantly, thank you for your continued support, patience, and understanding. ❤️

First of all, I want to say a huge thank you to everyone who took the time to share their feedback with me. After reading your comments, I realized that the repetitive parts in my writing are something I genuinely need to work on. I really appreciate everyone who pointed that out and shared their thoughts with me. I will definitely keep your feedback in mind and work on improving my writing from now on. ✍️✨

Now, regarding the next chapter...

Honestly, I am not entirely sure when I will be able to upload it. My exams are going on until 24th September, so for now, I need to focus on my studies and preparation. 📚📝

That being said, I will still try my best to work on the story whenever I get some free time. There is a possibility that I may be able to upload the next chapter sometime next week, but I do not want to make any promises at the moment.

If I am not able to upload a new chapter before then, please do not worry. ❤️ I will definitely return to the story once my exams are over on 24th September.

And if the next update comes after my exams, I am planning to make up for the wait by doing a mass release (of at least 5 chapters at the same time) around that period, so you will have plenty to read. ❤️✨

I know waiting for updates can sometimes be frustrating, and I truly appreciate your patience and understanding. I cannot promise an exact schedule right now, but I will do my best to keep working on the story and updating it whenever I can.

Thank you so much for reading, supporting my story, and sharing your feedback with me. It genuinely means more to me than I can put into words, and I feel incredibly grateful to have such wonderful readers. 🌷❤️

Please take care of yourselves, and wish me luck for my exams! 😭😅📚💗

I will see you all very soon. ❤️✨

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