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howtofeellove
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ENewly Awakened
22 hours ago Ch. 25

Hi, guys!! I hope you’re enjoying the story, and guess what? I’m back!

I’ll try to upload a new chapter every other day for now because I need to focus on my upcoming exams, lab work, and assignments as well.

I also wanted to ask for your advice. Do you prefer the original status window and system window formats, or would you rather have the information displayed inside colored boxes, such as blue, red, gold, purple, etc.?

If the majority prefers the box format, which color would you like me to use? Let me know your thoughts in the comments. I’d really appreciate your feedback.

And after that, I have another task to work on...

[IMPORTANT] I will be revising all the chapters little by little. Don’t worry, the actual content of the story will not change. I’m only going to improve the paragraph formatting.

I’ve noticed that I sometimes use lines containing only a single word or just a few words, and I also feel that this can break the immersion while reading. So, I’ll be adjusting the paragraph structure and combining some of those lines where appropriate to make the chapters flow more naturally.

Thank you for your patience, support, and feedback. I hope you’ll continue enjoying the story!

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Jieshika
ENewly Awakened
13 hours ago Ch. 25

Thanks for the long chapter! Looking forward to more!

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Jieshika
ENewly Awakened
13 hours ago Ch. 25
howtofeelloveHi, guys!! I hope you’re enjoying the story, and guess what? I’m back! I’ll try to upload a new chapter every other day for now because I...

I don't mind the one line paragraphs! I'm used to that flow from reading k-novels. In fact when it's a sound effect it emphasizes the urgency or action! I don't have a preference either way for the system being in a box effect. So far I haven't had any issues with following along, but if you're wanting to try it I'll give you feedback on how it looks! Keep up the fun flow!

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howtofeellove
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ENewly Awakened
10 hours ago Ch. 25
JieshikaThanks for the long chapter! Looking forward to more!

Thank you so much for the review! 😊 I completely agree that the sound effects are essential, and they will definitely remain. I will just try to reduce some of the repetition and make those parts flow more naturally.

For example, instead of writing separate lines like “He arrived here. He thought about this. He considered that…” I can combine the ideas into something smoother, such as “As he settled into his new surroundings, he thought about a new way to counter…”

Overall, I am not changing the story itself. The story, its direction, and the events will remain the same. I am only working on making the writing smoother and less repetitive. ✍️

Soon, one of my favorite acts from all the chapters I have written so far will be coming out, hopefully within the next 20 days. 😊 Little by little, beyond the goals of family safety, money and a better life, new goals and ambitions will also begin to unfold.

Thank you for reading and supporting the story. I truly appreciate it. ❤️ Please stay tuned! 🔥

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