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howtofeellove
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ENewly Awakened
1 month ago Ch. 25

Hi, guys!! I hope you’re enjoying the story, and guess what? I’m back!

I’ll try to upload a new chapter every other day for now because I need to focus on my upcoming exams, lab work, and assignments as well.

I also wanted to ask for your advice. Do you prefer the original status window and system window formats, or would you rather have the information displayed inside colored boxes, such as blue, red, gold, purple, etc.?

If the majority prefers the box format, which color would you like me to use? Let me know your thoughts in the comments. I’d really appreciate your feedback.

And after that, I have another task to work on...

[IMPORTANT] I will be revising all the chapters little by little. Don’t worry, the actual content of the story will not change. I’m only going to improve the paragraph formatting.

I’ve noticed that I sometimes use lines containing only a single word or just a few words, and I also feel that this can break the immersion while reading. So, I’ll be adjusting the paragraph structure and combining some of those lines where appropriate to make the chapters flow more naturally.

Thank you for your patience, support, and feedback. I hope you’ll continue enjoying the story!

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Jieshika
ENewly Awakened
1 month ago Ch. 25

Thanks for the long chapter! Looking forward to more!

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Jieshika
ENewly Awakened
1 month ago Ch. 25
howtofeelloveHi, guys!! I hope you’re enjoying the story, and guess what? I’m back! I’ll try to upload a new chapter every other day for now because I...

I don't mind the one line paragraphs! I'm used to that flow from reading k-novels. In fact when it's a sound effect it emphasizes the urgency or action! I don't have a preference either way for the system being in a box effect. So far I haven't had any issues with following along, but if you're wanting to try it I'll give you feedback on how it looks! Keep up the fun flow!

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howtofeellove
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ENewly Awakened
1 month ago Ch. 25
JieshikaThanks for the long chapter! Looking forward to more!

Thank you so much for the review! 😊 I completely agree that the sound effects are essential, and they will definitely remain. I will just try to reduce some of the repetition and make those parts flow more naturally.

For example, instead of writing separate lines like “He arrived here. He thought about this. He considered that…” I can combine the ideas into something smoother, such as “As he settled into his new surroundings, he thought about a new way to counter…”

Overall, I am not changing the story itself. The story, its direction, and the events will remain the same. I am only working on making the writing smoother and less repetitive. ✍️

Soon, one of my favorite acts from all the chapters I have written so far will be coming out, hopefully within the next 20 days. 😊 Little by little, beyond the goals of family safety, money and a better life, new goals and ambitions will also begin to unfold.

Thank you for reading and supporting the story. I truly appreciate it. ❤️ Please stay tuned! 🔥

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Jieshika
ENewly Awakened
3 weeks ago Ch. 35

Yesssss murim sidequest go! I'm very much enjoying the direction of your writing so far. There's so much potential for branching storylines while maintaining a central plot!

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Jieshika
ENewly Awakened
3 weeks ago Ch. 35
JieshikaYesssss murim sidequest go! I'm very much enjoying the direction of your writing so far. There's so much potential for branching storylin...

If there's anything to improve it would be to cull some of the repetition of conclusions that you've already revealed.

For example, once Hajin chose the key and revealed his objective to focus on knowledge instead of items, you only need to clarify his reasoning once instead of repeating the same thoughts before he steps into the roleplay dimension.

The repetition in such close proximity within the story makes the narration drag a little too much.

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howtofeellove
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ENewly Awakened
3 weeks ago

📢 A Little Announcement ❤️

Hi everyone! I hope you’re all doing well. 🌸

This is my first time making an announcement, so I wanted to take a moment to properly update you all and, most importantly, thank you for your continued support, patience, and understanding. ❤️

First of all, I want to say a huge thank you to everyone who took the time to share their feedback with me. After reading your comments, I realized that the repetitive parts in my writing are something I genuinely need to work on. I really appreciate everyone who pointed that out and shared their thoughts with me. I will definitely keep your feedback in mind and work on improving my writing from now on. ✍️✨

Now, regarding the next chapter...

Honestly, I am not entirely sure when I will be able to upload it. My exams are going on until 24th September, so for now, I need to focus on my studies and preparation. 📚📝

That being said, I will still try my best to work on the story whenever I get some free time. There is a possibility that I may be able to upload the next chapter sometime next week, but I do not want to make any promises at the moment.

If I am not able to upload a new chapter before then, please do not worry. ❤️ I will definitely return to the story once my exams are over on 24th September.

And if the next update comes after my exams, I am planning to make up for the wait by doing a mass release (of at least 5 chapters at the same time) around that period, so you will have plenty to read. ❤️✨

I know waiting for updates can sometimes be frustrating, and I truly appreciate your patience and understanding. I cannot promise an exact schedule right now, but I will do my best to keep working on the story and updating it whenever I can.

Thank you so much for reading, supporting my story, and sharing your feedback with me. It genuinely means more to me than I can put into words, and I feel incredibly grateful to have such wonderful readers. 🌷❤️

Please take care of yourselves, and wish me luck for my exams! 😭😅📚💗

I will see you all very soon. ❤️✨

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howtofeellove
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ENewly Awakened
6 days ago

Hi Guys! 😊

I hope you are all doing well.

As I promised, I would start revising the story once my exams were over on 24th September. As soon as my exam ended, I started working on the revisions, and I am happy to share that the first 18 chapters have now been revised.

While revising, I have tried my best to make the conversations smoother, improve the tense and sentence structure, make the overall flow better, and fix the mistakes that I noticed in the earlier chapters. I have also tried to make the reading experience more enjoyable and natural.

Personally, I believe these newly revised 18 chapters will be much more fun and enjoyable to read compared to the original versions. I have put a lot of effort into improving them, and I really hope you can feel the difference while reading. 😊

However, there are still 17 chapters left to revise. These chapters have considerably more mistakes and areas that need improvement compared to the first 18 chapters. This is why I would really appreciate your help once again. 🙏

If you have some time, please read through the revised chapters and share your honest thoughts with me. I would genuinely love to know how you feel about the changes, what you liked, what still feels weak, and what you think I could improve further.

I will be waiting for your reviews for the next 2 to 3 days. Your feedback will help me understand whether the changes I have made are actually improving the story and where I still need to put in more effort.

While waiting for your reviews, I will continue working on the remaining 17 chapters and try my best to improve them even further.

Once the entire revision is complete, I will start publishing new chapters again. And I am really excited about what comes next. ❤️

The initial chapters were mainly meant to build the foundation of the story, introduce the characters, establish the world, and set everything up for what is coming. Once we reach the Heavenly Demon Arc, the story will truly begin to enter its main phase, and I believe the upcoming chapters will be much more exciting and engaging.

Thank you so much for your patience, support, and for sticking with the story. It genuinely means a lot to me. ❤️

I am really looking forward to hearing your thoughts on the revised chapters.

Thank you once again, and I hope you enjoy the revisions! 😊🙏

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Goxelu
ENewly Awakened
5 days ago Ch. 9

I still find the transition from the previous chapter to this one kind of awkward. It's the repeating parts that change just enough to feel like theyre completely different maybe? Like a mini retcon?

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Goxelu
ENewly Awakened
5 days ago
howtofeelloveHi Guys! 😊 I hope you are all doing well. As I promised, I would start revising the story once my exams were over on 24th September. As ...

Hello It's good to see you're back, hope everything went well with exams.

To be conoletely honest, I can't clearly remember how the chapters were before your revisions, but I can definetly tell that it has been improved. At least my internal timing when reading doesn't start and stop continuously anymore. I also find there's less of the minor inconsistencies that were there before. Overall, it seems to me like the changes are positive, at least until chapter 17.

I wrote a separate comment but there's at least 2 instances where the start of the new chapter repeats almost word by word the ending lf the previous but with different details. At least to me, it feels weird, but I can understand it as it happened from another perspective or similar. It still feels like mini retcons though. Or like a recap from last chapter with extra info? However, I just read almost the exact thing a couple minutes ago, so maybe thats why it feels weird.

I still am enjoying the story, I hope you continue with this for a long time and that it's also rewarding for yourself

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howtofeellove
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ENewly Awakened
4 days ago Ch. 9
GoxeluI still find the transition from the previous chapter to this one kind of awkward. It's the repeating parts that change just enough to fe...

Hi! Thank you so much for the review! It really helped me. I’ll work on improving this chapter soon.

I’ll also go through the other chapters again and check for places where the beginning feels repetitive or too similar to the ending of the previous chapter. If I find any, I’ll make sure to revise them.

Thanks a lot for taking the time to point this out and share your feedback!

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howtofeellove
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ENewly Awakened
3 days ago

✨ BIG UPDATE, EVERYONE!! ✨

Hi guys!! 🥰❤️

I hope you’re all doing amazing!

After putting in a lot of time, effort, and countless revisions, I’ve finally revisited and revised all 35 chapters! 🎉📖

The first 22 revised chapters are now LIVE! 🚀✨ The remaining chapters are currently waiting for the admin’s review. Once they’re approved, you’ll be able to see all the changes I’ve made.

I’ve made A LOT of changes throughout the story. I worked really hard on these revisions, carefully going through each chapter and improving things wherever I felt they needed more attention.

I’ve also added new elements and characters to the story, including the introduction of Baek Yoo Bin’s father. 👀❤️‍🩹✍️

I genuinely hope these changes make the story better, smoother, and more enjoyable to read. ❤️

And there’s more! 👀🔥

Once everything is approved by the admin, Chapter 36 will also be released! 🎉📚 It is currently waiting for approval along with the revised chapters, so hopefully it will be live soon! 🤞✨

💭 Now, I’d Love to Hear From You!

I’m going to take about one week to read your reviews and feedback before I fully settle into uploading new chapters regularly.

Please tell me what you loved, disliked, enjoyed, or think could be improved. Your feedback genuinely means a lot to me. ❤️

It helps me understand what works for you as readers and, more importantly, gives me a chance to improve the upcoming chapters and make the story even better. 📝✨

After that week, I’ll do my best to start uploading new chapters regularly. 🔥📖

I really hope you’ll enjoy the revised chapters, notice the changes I’ve made, and most importantly, enjoy Chapter 36 once it finally goes live! ❤️‍🔥

And if you’re enjoying the story, please consider leaving a review and, if possible, adding the story to your library. ⭐📚

It might seem like a small thing, but every review, library add, comment, and bit of support means so much to me as an author. 🥺❤️

Thank you for sticking with the story, giving it a chance, and being here with me throughout this journey. ❤️

I’ve put a lot of love and effort into these revisions, and I truly hope that effort comes through when you read them.

I hope you enjoy what comes next. ❤️‍🔥📖✨

Thank you, everyone! ❤️

Happy reading! 📚✨

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Jieshika
ENewly Awakened
2 days ago Ch. 3

Oh wow the story reads so much smoother after your revisions! You've tightened up the narrative while still maintaining the pacing of the storyline. It reads way more naturally now with a good flow within and between paragraphs.

Gotta say, one of my favorite aspects of your writing is how you bring out Ha-jin's priorities in life. His cynicism is clear throughout, which makes the warmth with his family all that much more precious. That sibling love-hate-but-more-love-than-hate relationship is spot on!

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Jieshika
ENewly Awakened
2 days ago Ch. 11

I think I mentioned before that I really like this idea of the roleplay dungeons. It's such a great way of exploring side stories!

Your actions scenes are really well written. They're easy to follow but not so detailed that they drag. I also like how you're judicious with which fights to linger on. Keeps the writing tight!

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Jieshika
ENewly Awakened
2 days ago Ch. 11
JieshikaI think I mentioned before that I really like this idea of the roleplay dungeons. It's such a great way of exploring side stories! Your a...

In this chapter there were 2 slightly confusing points:

  • Mercenary 2 was defeated by a spear-like thrust but you described it as using the flat of the blade. Should it be the point? My mental picture had a hiccup here.

  • Was the 6th mercenary part of the 2 elite bodyguards that came forward with the squad leader? The narrative reads like the squad leader approached with 2 additional people after the 6th guy chickened out. So I had a lingering thought of "what about that guy?" at the end.

Don't worry this didn't decrease my enjoyment of the story at all! It's probably only something a visual reader like me would stumble over. My brain tends to keep track of enemies because I'm always worried they'll stab our MC in the back 🫣

Take this as a backwards compliment! Your writing is vivid enough that I can picture it all happening as I read!

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Jieshika
ENewly Awakened
1 day ago Ch. 13

Haha these last 2 chapters gave me whiplash in the best way! Administrator orb 77 with the I'm-so-done-with-this-job dialogue and then Ha-jin's un-teenage-boy-like disregard for the statuesque elf in his room 🤭 definitely hitting all those checkboxes for ultra-focused MC!

Also, love that mom trumps all dangers so far! Broken ribs mean nothing in the face of maternal misunderstandings 😂

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Jieshika
ENewly Awakened
1 day ago Ch. 15

🥹 and here we go with the found family dynamic. Gets me every time

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